Tuesday, March 11, 2008
lenses
Wow I don't think I could care less about this essay, but thanks for explaining how a microscope works that was exactly what I needed. That was called sarcasm. This author needs to understand that no one cares what she has to say. I think Stephen kind was right some people are crazy, this girl collects urine. And then I got to the part about swans. I don’t know if anyone told Annie but an introduction should have something to do with the paper. I also appreciated her geography lesson about Virginia. That was easily the worst essay I have ever read. She had no point no reason for writing nothing was interesting about the essay and all she did was take two completely random things and compare them to each other. so I guess the next time I’m next to a pond with swans overhead with binoculars in my hand I’m going to throw my binoculars in the pond and go do something important with my time. which would be anything other that writing an essay about urine and boring birds. Someone needs to take Annie’s right to write away and remove anything that could be used as a writing implement from her, for the sake of good, worthwhile literature.
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Chuck,
3 comments for you:
1. Good job on catching up on your journals.
2. You missed one: Rodriguez. You don't have to make it up at this point.
3. My challenge to you on future journals is to write your first response, as you've been doing. But then, wait five minutes, think a bit harder about whatever the reading was and try to see it from a different perspective. This way you'll get closer to meeting the word limit and you may be pleasantly surprised by your opinions.
jf
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